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UZI IS A BOY THATS ALWAYS CARRIES A PAIR OF UZI'S JUST INCASE OF AND EMERGENY!!!!! UZI PART 2 WILL BE COMING OUT SOON!!!! THX PEEPS!!!!
Abit old but still ok
Hmm ok this one was differant, i like the little animation at the start before it starts, i thought the menu screen was kinda silly, seems like you had alot of symbols and stuff there in just crampped all over and seemed like too much, but for an older flash its not so bad, you had oranges and greens there but you should think about mixing it up abit, so its not all the same, and i would also lose the outline over the symbols, allthough the symbols are nothing much anyways, Now for the whole button thing i think you should remove the buttons and just let it flow like a flash movie, the buttons slow it down, There was far too much gradients used, and it didnt show the effort you could have done with more creations with shades detail, so try that out aswell, but anyways this was pretty good, good luck on your next one.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Instead of all the gradiend circles you should have more shades, and remove the ouline aswell, and use less gradients, Now with buttons its ok, but if you let it flow more like a movie without the buttons it will run smoother, to me in my opinion the buttons seem to slow it down and tends to get anoying with all the clicking, so try it out with removing the buttons, if you dont kike that style you can always go back to the other way. Less gradients next time also.
A decent story, too much use of gradients though.
drawings were bad animation was worse, and script is worse than both. I can't imagine why someone would make something like this I could barely sit through watching it it, it must have been excruciating sitting through it's making.
This was poor work
you dont even seem like u took a week on this, this was a waste of a flash doc.
Very poor job
The main story to this was poor and wasn't going to make a good movie but surely you could ahve done better than this with it. When the guy in the car started abusing the kid it was just pathetic, then the kid shot him and suddenly loads of cops turned up, think things through thats impossible for them to turn up so quick, then the kid started shooting the cops and was hiding behind the car for cover but you could see him through the cars number plate and it just looked really stupid, I wouldn't reccomend remaking this, as the story itself is poor and you didn't have any good ideas.
I've watched paint dry that was more entertaining
the sounds are obnoxious, the FX is lame, the text is hard to read. Better luck next time I s'pose.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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