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This is just a fast animation I did a while back..
- This is my first movie in flash ever (Besides the one that got blammed :S ) so it sucks, I know.
But I can take criticism, that way I can only get better, right?
this wasn't that bad. coulda gone on longer
i actually wouldn't mind seeing more. there's potential here, and i like it
Not terrible dude
You need to work on the animation, it seemed quite jittery. I know it's a short, but there should still be a storyline, and i consider shorts to be at least 1 minute. It's all opinion.
I like the graphics though, and i'm sure you'll be able to get the animation better.
it sucked balls...but i like the style
i thought the whole movie overall was just a waste of time for me to see. Although i will say that the style in which the characters are made seem original and i thought it was good. I think that if you put your time a effort into another projects it would be pretty good. Cuz the whole non-sotp actoin thing is getting worn out just like the NUma numa song parodies....anyways bad start but look at it this way only way to go is up now. so best of luck to you
....wouldn't call it ultimate XD haha.
i would say you can animate well, but not quite well enough to make the 'ultimate' short movie, :P haha.
the graphics were pretty good, and i liked the setting of the fight. the animation was smooth for the most part, and you had some pretty good sound effects to go along with it. not bad!
(THE THUMB: UP)
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