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I know the quality is crap, that's my fault, it won't happen again! My second ever flash about a psychotic murderer who get's thrown into an asylum.
Interesting dark style, with some cool possible potential for a series... just as long as you can keep it funny that is...
i am impressed.
Large amount of potential here.
You have found a very likeable storyline and threw it into an unlikeable, quality deprived environment.
As for suggestions, I'd love to help you out with textures for objects and scenery, but that is your choice to make. That was the main fault of this whole submission.
But characters are another story. You have created great characters, those which names I forgot, but liked nonetheless.
The small guy that stutters was done very well, and the guy that discovered the meaning of life was a funny twat.
With audio, you screwed up in the beginning where you threw in some happy scene setting music and then cut it off almost as soon as it started. The guards that threw in the boy into the padded room had horrible voiceovers, and their drawings were lacking. Although you did make use of the boy @ holding the bars on the door very well..
I can tell that you got lazy with this submission, and maybe you should take a step back and polish your work before even thinking about submitting it.
Well done, and I hope you get off to a better start with the series in the next episode, possibly even redo the first one and make it slightly longer and more enjoyable.
Email me if you need any help.
Thanks for the watch.
I don't like this.
I don't like goths and I don't like this! Sorry dude. Aghh,.. Don't kill me.. just kidding! (Eat a Cheeseburger)!
could be better goth humour aint funny
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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