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Might want to turn up ur speakers couse you can berly hear the sound fx
i did fix the talking tho
go easy on this one is one of my first
well enjoy ur show.
that was just weird, but why did they snipe that guy anyways?
It's an alright start for ya. It's not exactly something i would blam, because of obvious effort and time put in. Then again, its not really the best thing in the world now is it?
you seem to have a good grasp on liniar objects: ie, guns, inanimate objects, cars, planes, ect. i liked the reactions of the streaks on the road, well done. however your organic animation is very much lacking. as are your audio skills.
stay away from the stick men, the filled in black characters, and work on more of a story, tell us why the hell they shoot this guy in the begining. hope this was helpful. and if you want any pointers on how to do something in flash in the future feel free to contact me.
Rock Rock on!
Well, considering you seem to be relatively a newcomer to Flash, this isn't bad. The animations could've been much more slick, and the voices weren't very clear or well-done, but you have the right idea. You don't deserve a blam, so let's hope you don't get one.
This has no real point but keep trying .
this flash is king of sketchy and the sound is kind of bad but you should still keep trying to make better flashes .
Did you submit this before?
I have seen this flash before.
Are you the original author?
It looks the same as the last time I saw it.
not too bad but the sound is lousy.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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