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Jan 30, 2005 | 9:23 PM EST

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Test on 3D illusion effects (this is no real 3D) by radial and linear mode and also a test for blood stuffs.

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AbadaxAbadax

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Not good...

I can see that you tried really hard with the artwork. You put alot of effort into the graidents. though when the camera was inside the ship you should have made the music softer. not completly muted it. And the blood when the red ones died was badly done too. It was just a huge splat. If you think about actually getting shot in real life. it dosnt happen like that. Blood trickles everywhere.

@AngryAlt
It wasnt actually stupid an pointless. You dont have to go bashing his work to shit just becuase it wasn't top notch.

"Newgrounds is a site that showcases cartoons and games...not a site to "test" mediocre flash.
Work hard on your cartoon or game before you submit it."
No. Actually Newgrounds is a portal to display flash and audio AND artwork for creative criticism. And besides. If you would read the description it clearly states that it a test for BLOOD. Not flash animation

"Think, "Have I really done all I can do?" and "Is this really worth submitting or am I just adding another piece of shit to the already overflowing septic tank?".
Well in this case you added that extra piece of shit."
Again; no. Maybe he has already done all he can do. And maybe it was worth submitting to him. He might of felt it was a great work of art and it deserves some crit. He didnt add another piece of shit. he added another Piece of clothing to the charity box.

"Next time, BEFORE you submit something to Newgrounds you should "test" it with friends...get the opinions of your friends online and offline.
Don't submit tests and do not submit crap."
And maybe he did already test it with friends? Maybe they already approved it. Saying; "newgrounds is the perfect place for more crit than we could give you" So he posted it. Then you come along....

@ kelin's responce:
"I really don't care about your opinion."
You should. The fact that he might not be a troll and he might actually mean what he is saying (though it was very harsh) you should care about the "customer's" opinion. Even though it is very harsh as i said before.



CrispyRaccoonCrispyRaccoon

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

..but with better grammar

yeah, and better sense, why would they blow a hole in the front of it, if they are going to teleport on board?


KDindustry responds:

I'm not an american, first thing. My primary languge is chinese, then french, then englsih. And if they teleport aboard, they have to disactivate the exterior shield or their particle will just blows out at the contact of it. I know it's not really easy to understand...


AngryAltAngryAlt

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Stupid and pointless.

This sucked.
Art = Poor
Animation = Very Poor
Grammer = Poor
Overall Quality = Nil

Newgrounds is a site that showcases cartoons and games...not a site to "test" mediocre flash.
Work hard on your cartoon or game before you submit it.

Think, "Have I really done all I can do?" and "Is this really worth submitting or am I just adding another piece of shit to the already overflowing septic tank?".
Well in this case you added that extra piece of shit.

Next time, BEFORE you submit something to Newgrounds you should "test" it with friends...get the opinions of your friends online and offline.
Don't submit tests and do not submit crap.


KDindustry responds:

You seems to be the only one to think like this. By the way, I really don't care about your opinion. Instead, try to think, "Do i know how to make flash? Can I only draw like him?"... mh.


CAP-SERGEANTCAP-SERGEANT

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

good background info

something i saw in here is different than the others i have reviewed. it gave a background to the movie. keep making movie with detail and info.



ShintShint

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Pretty Good

Two things: first, check spelling/grammer/etc. Second, slow the dialogue down so it can be read