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Jun 14, 2000 | 3:48 AM EDT

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Razoric.com's very first flash cartoon. :)
Warning: It sucks a lot of ass, but I guess it's worth the small download time.

Reviews


XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 13, 2010

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Ok this was entertaining i know its an older flash, but there could have been still a few changes, like when the guy is "WALKING" you should have it so the limbs are animated so that will give off a more walking animation, its just little things like that, that will really show off the animation and its detail, Als you may want to ad a "REPLAY" button at the end so that people can replay the animation, I think also that more needs to be added, its too short and really doesnt give enough of the story since it is really short so maybe more story to it, also abit more "DETAIL" like with the "GUN" it was just plain and grey, it needs more detail to the gun like other shades of color, some screws like a gun might have, just the little things like that is what really helps to improve, on stuff and really present a better flash animation, So it was a good flash just abit too short, needs a few fixes as suggested above, so good luck on any new stuff. Untill next time, i did enjoy this little flash, so keep up the decen work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a replay button at the end, ad some animation the the character when walking mainly showing him walking instead of just having the character "SLIDING" Making the story longer with more characters more then just the few scenes you had there, it will generly make a much better prduction of a flash, also as mentioned above you need more effort in detail like the gun,

~~OVERALL~~
An entertaining flash could be improved but for the mostpart i enjoyed it.

~X~



El-SydEl-Syd

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars February 21, 2009

hmmm

at least I was warned by the author's comments, but there really wasn't a point to any of it, and it just comes off as completely unmemorable.



AfroUnderscoreStudAfroUnderscoreStud

Rated 1 / 5 stars September 8, 2005

Hmm should have been longer

I'm not really sure if this was a portal piss-take or not, certain aspects of it seemed to suggest that but then theres a chance that it wasn't, pretty confusing. Anyway the start was completely stupid but when Ned went back it seemed like it could have been pretty good as I thought he was going to go insane or something, but he just ripped that girls face off and then it ended, you should have continued on from there and had Ned just going crazy and it could have been an alright flash movie.


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looniferloonifer

Rated 4 / 5 stars May 21, 2005

What the fuck

That was the stupidest thing on newgrounds. It was so bad it was fucking hilarious. Great job



tydiggytydiggy

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 9, 2005

that was so goddamm funny!

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