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Jan 26, 2005 | 7:34 PM EST

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This took me too long to finish, hope you enjoy it and get the message (which is not that drugs are bad). Song is Love Craved by Dreamscaper from the Audio Portal.

*edit* Improved/fixed ending.

Reviews


conpanbearconpanbear

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 25, 2008

I'm a little confused

Maybe I'm just an idiot, but at first I thought he went into the toilet and ate a urinal cake!! Haha, still interesting to watch. If "drugs are bad" was not the message, maybe it was "urinal cakes are poisonous"!!



ninja-dogninja-dog

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 16, 2005

Drugs are bad for you!

I just watched slap and this has also pretty good artwork good luck in the future! (I wrote a long review for slap ^^)


BaconisGood4You responds:

Thanks alot thehellfreezer, good to see someone who enjoys may work :D.

And this isn't about drugs >_<. It's alright though, its easy to think that.


JamesJJamesJ

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 3, 2005

good work!

that was brilliant. well done.


BaconisGood4You responds:

Thanks alot JamesJouni!


MurrayMurray

Rated 2 / 5 stars January 27, 2005

Fine start with Flash

This flash is quite good, although nothing much really happened. Just the person walking through the disco room to the toilet and back. However, I respect the fact that this is your first flash and I find the graphics alright, but I know you will improve. The outline of the characters were a bit too thick, so maybe thinning the layers will make the characters look a bit better. Also, try to use some shading on the characters. Other than that, this flash wasn't too bad. Fine work.


BaconisGood4You responds:

Thanks for the review Bahamut7. Wanted to keep it simple since it was my first, so I expect my next movies will be a bit more detailed. Will keep your criticism of the graphics in mind.


happyboxhappybox

Rated 3 / 5 stars January 27, 2005

FlowGo

Your animation has a good theme and concept. Just a few notes...

This animation should be a little shorter. There are periods of repetition or lagging action. Cut down on some of the repetitive shots.

Remember that when you do something weird, some people watching it might not get it, so you have to kida self-explain. For example, I don't get why the music stopped halfway through. If it was because the dude stopped hearing it, maybe you could faze it out or do some other kind of audio effect so the audience gets the clue that his perception is fading in that area.

In the bathroom, I take it the things on the wall are supposed to be mirrors with the reflections of the bathroom stall doors in them? You might want to make at least a few of the reflections backwards, as they would show up in a mirror.

But remember, you have a good concept and theme. Work on the presentation a little to make it awesome.


BaconisGood4You responds:

"This animation should be a little shorter. There are periods of repetition or lagging action. Cut down on some of the repetitive shots." -Agreed and noted, this was my first movie, so hopefully my shots will improve.

"For example, I don't get why the music stopped halfway through. If it was because the dude stopped hearing it, maybe you could faze it out or do some other kind of audio effect so the audience gets the clue that his perception is fading in that area." -I guess this was just my n00bness. It was meant to fade out when he hits the floor, but I guess I did it wrong. (Music was on stream, used custom edit to dim music at a certain time, did not realize it included load times). Sorry that happened.

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In the bathroom, I take it the things on the wall are supposed to be mirrors with the reflections of the bathroom stall doors in them? You might want to make at least a few of the reflections backwards, as they would show up in a mirror." -DOH! i r sm4rt!