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Khaox

idt75

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Date Submitted

01/25/2005 | 11:13PM EST

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Movie | 1.5 MB

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2.24 / 5.00

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See if Kyrax can hold the Khaox sword without being corrupted...

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Average Score: 5.6 / 10

Score: 3
Shadow-781

"Just one BIG ending?(wanted 2 go on but no space!)"

date: March 23, 2005

The main body of this flash appears to be the text at the beggining. Now this usually isn't a bad thing as it allows the reader to engage and think about the plot before the action takes off and leaves the veiwer behind. However, the BGM (Background music) on the text part was very repetitive and somewhat annoying, making it a little distrating for me so i struggled to stay focused when reading. I'm afraid just lost interest in that part. Also, it may just be my retarded brain, but i really didn't get a few things about that... for instance, why did he throw the sword in the first place? and so what happens now there is no avenger? The story just dies??
Ok.. on with the explaination of rankings, then.. Graphics i thought were mediocer, most people add about that much detail to flash animations, can't really say much more than that. Though the writting on the side of the pillar type thing the sword was suspended on looked pretty cool. Style i thought was fairly poor due to the long somewhat boring reading section at the beggining, so mayhaps you could make changes in that area next time round? Sound.. ah, now this was the good bit. The change in music as the character dies is very good and it works well, so congrats on that.

Author's Response:

wow thx alot for the comments and I'm glad that you saw my efforts for the music mix. And for explanation, just read my response to the review just before yours. And this was my first idea, I know its strange, but I wanted to test my skills and I wont make a sequel. But thx again =)

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Score: 7
Meebs

"...uhhh.."

by: Meebs
date: March 23, 2005

It was good, nice animations, good drawing, but the story is lacking. It doesnt really make sense. Why did he throw the sword into a rock? why did the rock explode? Good animation, keep it up, but get a story first.

Author's Response:

thx for the appreciation, and I'll explain you: the sword detected that Kyrax had not pure intentions, so, when he took the sword, the sword glowed, and then the eyes went red, that meant Kyrax has been cursed by the sword. So, he threw the sword away, and the curse made that the sword came back and killed the guy, that's the law of the Khaox sword. I know it's strange, but it was my first idea so I did this and now I work on other things. Like you see, my second flash is very different, and next time it'll surely be a real animation(movie) and I'll try to improve my skills again. I won't make a sequel, so thx again for the review =)

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Score: 6
Rubbertje

"I like it!"

date: March 13, 2005

It's not like awesome, but it's pretty entertaining! I think you can do much better if you work harder and longer on it! You can really see that you've got skills!

Greets,

Rubbertje

Author's Response:

Thx a lot =)

I know this isn't very very great but since I've finished this one I'm thinking a lot and I'll do some other style of flash, but I'll take my time.
And of course I'll choose sounds and/or musics very carefully, sounds and musics are very important to me.

Thx again and see ya next time!

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Score: 6
midam

"its like a bullet shape hole in my mind..."

by: midam
date: January 29, 2005

...a place were the answer should be.

As i just said, ur flash looks more like the work of a 12 year old girl whose having breasts problems...

Just tell me if im wrong...idt75 muhahahahaha...im gonna beat u at badminton

Author's Response:

No I'm gonna beat u at badminton and I can say (with all my great knowledge) that you are a 12 years old girl with breasts problems...
muhahahaha...
=)

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Score: 4
KWAS71KCK

"ok"

date: January 26, 2005

not too too bad, a bit random overall, but it could've been without sticks and its score could've been better.

Author's Response:

I know sticks figures aren't popular anymore but I didn't have a big choice. I'll try to do better next time... Thx for your appreciation
=)

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