improve a little
I think you should improve a little on this one.the music was good but I wish there was voiceovers.
Author Comments
It has the same story as my first it only looks way better and i added more detail! the bears are trying to kill master Sho-yu so they can get something he is gaurding.
the only reason you get a one is for th aphex song
otherwise this movie blew some nuts. Also, learn how to fucking spell before you make a god damn movie!!!
ZIM106 responds:
well.... i could have had a better song for the movie, but that one really just made the movie feel.... well it's hard to explain, but whatever man... and i'm sorry i misspelled some of the words although i looked over the movie over and over and i couldn't find the misspelled word???
Could Be Better
I like the idea, but the execution needs work. There is far too much exposition from the characters and not enough storyline. Not that this idea requires storyline, but static bearheads spouting out speech bubbles isn't going to win you friends. What you need to do, then, is to storyboard the next episode to coherently tell the story. The action was neat, but there needed to be more of it. Otherwise, a neat attempt, but more effort could truly make this neater.
ZIM106 responds:
Well i really haven't got into the stroy yet in this episode... just introduced the characters... well most of them, but thanks for the good advice... it might be helpful in the near future.
listen
shave your dads hat hair
ZIM106 responds:
U had to ahve liked the movie a little BIT!!!!!!!!!!! Right???
unpolished
it was retarded. I dont have anything left to say
ZIM106 responds:
Well mabye your the retarded one!!!! don't call someones movie retarded if it's better then yours!!!! Oh.... sorry you don't even have any flash!!! So saying retarded stuff about someone elses flash doesn't make you look good so go get a life!!!!