Score: 10

"just a few pointers"

by: PixelDragon

date: November 5, 2007

Overall it was great, nice animation to go with the music, and although I don't really understand it it's a well animated work. But just to help out I noticed a few things...(1) There should be a line connected on the phone when he picks it up and throws it. and (2) When in the animation with the wooden boards, take notice how they are paper-thin, you can curve them to make them look more realistic. Other than those I absolutly love that "Wizard Of Oz" ending!

Score: 8

"Great!"

by: Mushaboom

date: February 11, 2007

That was really good! The only point of improvement I could suggest is making the stick figure into a real character. I can see that you're capable of doing good graphics from your backgrounds and objects, why not apply it to the main character? Overall a great first submission, though!

Score: 10

"Wow Deep....."

by: vkooch

date: October 22, 2005

that flash was great.. the symbolism of the red rose to the noose, and then to the end. The music was perfect for it, I really enjoyed it.

Score: 7

"pretty good!"

by: Matt-Merrill

date: October 17, 2005

Why was the noose colored? I'm assuming you did that on purpose...

and I agree with the person below me that this would be better with an actual character other than a stick figure. Facial expressions can help with mood a lot.

Score: 8

"Nice job, but..."

by: Blood-Bedewed-Angel

date: July 6, 2005

I really wish your protagonist wasn't a stick figure with tube arms and no neck. I really do. You used a lovely song- one of my favorites- and you played the symbolism very well. Excellent use of color, which is why I didn't completely slam you on graphics. The rose was used especially well. Thanks for sharing this with us.
-Love