nice one!
this is a pretty good flash because u kinda make him seem like a real person. nice art style (kinda tim burton) nice piano in background no violence but the way he describes the things is violent lol.AGAIN, nice flash.
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-Edit: The music has been fixed.-
If you could venture into this mind of this little boy, what do you think you would find? Sorrow, adventure, hate, pleasure...or perhaps.. silence? This is the first episode of a new series, and I guess this is more of an introduction, the real story starts in the next episode. Remember, friends, watch the whole thing
Good
Why did this movie just stopped?Does it continue in the next episode?I'm going to watch the other episodes too.Keep up the good work Danny Lace.
Had Potential But Then Fell Short
When it started at the beginning it seemed like it was going to be a very innovative cartoon but then it just ended abruptly. So......... I have to say I did not like it one bit. Very bad. Nice Try! Add something to the end.
GoldenTaco responds:
I know what you mean, I wince when I watch this one. I'm currently in the process of doing a longer, more detailed version of the story told better, and not seperated into three short clips like this one, but one long one. Also, it won't be told internally, you'll see it happen.
Did you watch the other 2? Since that wasn't really the end.
I love this
You captured the feelings of isolation, betrayal, hopelessness, and depression perfectly. Everything about this animation from the music to the way the character moves is impressive. While it is basically just a boy sitting in a room, there is enough going on the entire time to keep it interesting... no crappy 10 minute credits, this animation has absolutely no fat on it at all.
I look forward to future animations from you - do not think that because you are 79 that it is too late to turn this into an ongoing series!
So sayith the Sludge Queen...
The story line was interesting. I would like to see the rest of it. But the ending could have been better and I agree with the previous guy that the grinning face at the end doesn't fit in. So sayith the Sludge Queen!
GoldenTaco responds:
Okay!
