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Despite the crappy voices and all?!?!?!
In the name of Steven's Comics Productions (which is just me) I promise I'll add subtitles to this movie! So stay tuned!
and now, back to the original disclaimer:
This was done for my intermediate Flash class. I have barely 6 months using flash, so don't be too hard on the critiques. Also, stay for the credits! oh, and Sir Elton John...don't sue!
well this sucked ass. i cuden understand the badly animated little kid at all. i think u shud just avoid this completly because i wud just preffer to go watch the tweenies or sum shyt like that because it wud b a hell of a lot more exciting and fun to watch.
wrong wrong wrong...
so characters read from right to left in english? I thought only Japanese read right to left. (what i'm getting at is, pay attention to the animation of the hippos eyes when he reads the cue card about breakfast..it's farked!)
also the lil girl's voice is soo whack and annoying I had to muffle the sound with my 10 inch subwoofer that's connected to my XBOX playing Halo-2. (yesh!)
also the song at the end entitled: "Rocket Man" is a clealry stolen idea from "family Guy" on "Cartoon Network's: Adult Swim"
think of your own material, make the voices sound like actual actors instead of high pitched screams from a fucking banchee, and learn the fact that English speaking people read LEFT to RIGHT. Get it RIGHT!
I gave this a 1 because it has potential to become better if you use your own ideas, and clean it up a bit.
I wish there was more like this on Newgrounds
It was an awsome movie, I agree with your statement about the voices being bad...well, I guess if you re-did this submission and only fixed the girl and the hippo-guy, to make them easier to understand, the rest of the voices were nice and clear....but still great movie and I won't dock ya a point for the voices... great job
This is a great flash, i haven't seen anything like this on newgrounds (which is a bad thing). You definetley need to make more movies like this. Reminded me of Death to Smoochy....great movie.
great and funny flash i hope u make more flah movie that are just as good and funny
A short film about a park bench
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