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u get to witness first hand the sad story of one lonely man. (sorry about the loudness later on.)
Not a bad movie, concentrated on humor, which wasn’t ok, drawing and animation were fine, nothing too bad or amazing either, just a fun short. The subject was ok. I think you should have changed the music though, it was a bit annoying at times. Other than that, it was pretty good, you should continue with flash, you have a pretty good shot if you decide to keep making them.
Graphics: 7, Well drawn in an FBF form, animations was smooth and clear, good for a first submission.
Style: 6, Pretty good overall, it was a comedy style movie, which I like…Not badly executed either.
Sound: 8, The song is ok but rather annoying at the beginning, I’d recommend it changed.
Violence: 0, It’s a song about soda drinks, Pigs will fly before this movie is considered violent.
Interactivity: 2, Guess what, a play button… Great.. I’d recommend you add some more control to the viewer, scene select. Quality control, sound control, that sort of stuff, it would make the movie better, trust me on this one.
Humor: 6, It had humor, nothing hilarious but decent enough to watch.
Overall: 6, Not bad overall, but you should have kept making them.
That was some good stuff... the audio was entertaining and you did the best you could with the song. Good work.
That last dude loves the cock
I like your stupid humor, the animation was alright, and i liked the music even if it was a little odd... heheh burrito
im sorry but im just 14 and there is so much anger in side of me i will take it all out on the crappy films of newgrounds, as for this pile of revulting dung Mr ryan snow i hope your forced to clean your grandfathers asshole with your toungue and after that i hope you die of of a diesease and fall strait in the middle of hell , and then i pray to saintan that he makes you stick your head up richerd nixions ass, people like you make me sick with your stupidity and your reatarded sence of humor
OK, so maybe a lot of people won't understand this type of humor, but the music alone creates a great mood. Funny throughout with a good ending. I hope you make more soon.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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