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This is my third remake of my very first animation. I been adding to it and I appreciate everyone who gave constructive comments last time. I'm planning to make more episodes and I'm working on a fight scene. Hope you like :)
at least it's not some boring sprite movie putting me to sleep. Some very poorly drawn characters playing musical instruments... very cool. This movie seemed rather short though.. could be better and longer.
It was pretty funny, it needs a little refining, not much, just a few touch-ups here and there.
The intro was great!...
Not too bad.
I liked the music a lot. The animation is pretty basic, but it`s better than I could ever do. :P I did like this flash though. It`s cute, and you didn`t need talking to reveal what the characters were thinking. :D
It started out looking okay and everything--I mean, the graphics aren't impressive at all, but at least they're a little more refined than most movies like this--i.e., bad drawing skills, pseudo-stick characters with floating appendages--which actually is a cheap way of going around the technical aspects of character design and makes characters easier to animate than if they were stick figures.
But it really needs a lot more than what was in the movie. While the effects were decent, the action was too slow and it was neither funny nor interesting. Next time you might want to write up a script--add some dialogue--make SOMETHING else happen other than maybe 2 or 3 things that happen veeeery slowly. Since it isn't all crap I gave it a 2 to keep it alive. Better luck next time.
but personally i preferred the intro! 3/5
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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