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The tragic story of a boy and his skateboard
Identical to the previous submitted game...
...and even not a good game to copy.
Abit slow but its entertaining
First off props to you on a decent "MENU" Screen, its not great but its something more then just a blank loader and such that more do, i really liked what you did here with the orange brick and nifty play button so notbad there for the start of this, Now the "BUTTONS are neat but i think its not needed maybe as a game part but it just seems that it gets anoying when moving along, and as for the "CHARACTER" it was too "FLAT" you should make a more full on character with shades and much more detail then you had, Now as the game itself it was cute with all the flips and tricks, and i do understand the reason of the buttons but you need more effort on the character design and also like when the skater gets hit by the car, add some "BLOOD" in that part, and even a differant pose like he is dead , anyways nice job at a game, i hope it can improve.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A number of things i said like more poses of the character besides just the flat pose, and ad some blodd, and such, and speeding up the animation would be a nice added touch.
Overall a good animation abit slow and simple but it was amusing none the less.
this is just a/n(exact)copy of hazzardx's fatal skate, which was released earlier on the exact same day, which wasn't so good the first time around either.
(title in work)
As if the first one wasn't bad enough, you had to submit it again. It's the same exact game as your other one with no improvements to anything. The animations were still just as bad, and the graphics were just as bad. So as I said again, make the game have a better ending, and definitely some better animations.
Why submit the same game twice?
You'd already submitted this as Fatal skate why bother submitting it again? You hadn't made any changes, so why bother?
As this is the same as Fatal Skate my review for that game applies to this as it's exactly the same game, so here it is:
It was a different idea for having to pick different things for a skater to do in order to keep him alive(well I say that) but it needed more to it, perhaps you could ahev picked the option and had to do the tricks yourself or soemthing, some music would also have been a nice addition to this game, as the occasional sound effects just weren't enough, the animation also needed a lot of work as it was very poor and basic.
And please don't submit the same submission twice to Newgrounds theres no point to it whatsoever.
What’s inside this box? A lot of puzzles! Can you solve all 30?
Use the mouse to navigate menus and to queue and cancel robot actions.
Made for the Adventure Jam 2016!
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