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DELETED SUBMISSION

January 5, 2005 –
April 26, 2011
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

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Good storyline, but very bad animation, which for those of you that have forgotten, is basically the whole theme on this site. I don't care if someone has voted better on piconjo, in my opinion this is no better, it has a story behind it yes, but i hardly think the author of this took more than two days to make this, wow a robot walking around on completely unrelated backgrounds, with text popping up now and then, a nice thought ruined by poor animation.

riiight. what was the point of this movie? what ever it was it really sucked ass. b4 u add something like this to ng make sure its worth it. cuz there was no point in it.

a serious flash? what's serious about a big blue robot with random ass pictures (which have nothing to do with loneliness i might add) flashing behind it saying "im lonely". It's like a sorry ass emo punk song. cmon man at least use a more advanced looking robot. the one you used looked like a retarded version of the Iron Giant.

Excellent work for a serious flash.

I had heard from others that this flash absolutely blew. But I thought it was very well done.

Since it is not comedy you have alot less competition. And I thought that it was moving and very emotional. I can relate to that bag o' bolts.

The only suggestions, and take into account they are only suggestions, for improvement.
1) Instead of flying sideways at the end (which was not very cool, and seemed confusing), I think he should walk more, maybe 1/2 way off the screen, then end with him fully on the screen on the right side (whre he layed at the end, but upright) then have him stop animating and just stand there for a while.
2) Maybe tweak the narrative a bit, to play on the emotions a bit more.

Good work.

I thought it had a really good meaning and the metaphor was well done and thought out. Good work

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