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//Loved flash then and still do now, however I am focusing my time into the 3D market and the Unreal Engine of late. Wont be any flash for awhile. :(
do not expect uber flash skillz
this is my first ever!
with that being said
Really nice given it's your first flash and all. I encourage you to keep on learning, and keep publishing!
Great music. You managed to keep our attention with the scenes and music, plus it wasn't annoyingly lengthy. Short and to the point. And you even managed to convey emotion! Heh, it was a bad dream after all. Wasn't it?
Seriously speaking, something like this could get turned into a series. You never know.
Ehh not bad... Since its your very first one Id say its good. Somethings you need to improve on is...
- Making full characters
- Making them a little longer
- Tell us who some of those characters were (Names)
yea i agree with the person before me i like it but the people need a complete and total makeover so theres flesh and stuff but its good nonetheless
All you need to do is work on how you draw your people, other then that its all good....
For your first flash this is really good. Only thing is your people. Make them look more real and this would be awsome.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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