its was ok

that was ok considering that its kinda sluggesh.

Dull.

Blotchy, sloppy artwork, bland audio and little suspense. It's obvious that you at least put some thought into your character designs, but the whole thing feels really rushed and bears an unsettling resemblance to those banal DBZ-"inspired" duel flicks. There isn't much of a story to speak of, and what little there is isn't particularly thrilling. But hey, it's your first shot, so instead of giving you stock "best of luck" responses, I'll merely suggest that you practise refining your artwork and try to make the camera movements less sluggish and more precise, which will improve the pacing. It's a case of effort more than anything. Try to work a little harder next time.

3

More could of been added. The blood part was sorta cheesy. I thought the characters were good though, but the flash needed to be more captivating. I think more effort could of made this flash way better. Other then that, I liked the storyline.

at least i didn't give you a 0.....

that didn't grab my attention even though it was short. you need more details on your drawings man. if that's the best you can do.... ohhh you need more practice. to me, it just seem like you didn't put much effort into it.

Not bad

it needed to be a bit longer than that, it was good basically.