Good but so many grammar errors!?!?!??!?!?!
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enjoy---
(i no i spelt it wrong in areas, please i made this on spare time and in a few days and am to lazy to go back and fix it)
Ummmm...
Ok. I understand that this was made on "spare time". But,this thing is way too short for there to be so many spelling errors. Even the grammar is bad. Very,very bad.
Pretty Good,
Yeah, just too short. Great start though!
erhm...
Why up there is spelled resident CHORNO?
kinda short after all
Too short, but promising
Way too short man.
It does have a great outlook though.
