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sry, this is the real one

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um...

I'm sorry, this isn't america's funniest home vids... you should put subtitles at least cuz i cannot understand their foreign baby talk. guy bended down and farted? that's crazy... now he's yawning and opening his arms.. that's very scary. damn... heh, this was alright i guess, you should have found better punching sound fx's. :P

What were you trying to achieve?

The almost coreographed 'fight scene' is what got the 1 overall point. But what the h ell were you trying to achieve, humour, mocking chinese (or japenese, you seemed to confuse them) martial arts films? What was with the fart humour? Also don't attack reviewers, you should thank them for putting up with the poorly editted composition of that movie. Seriously, if you sorted out your ideas, stopped goofing around then I think you could take this somewhere.

Or maybe not. I just resent you for mouthing off at the reviewers and the immaturity of the 'film'. It's not *that* bad

machstealth responds:

why dont u try and make movies instead of mocking others hard work

crap

probably the lamest movie ive ever seen...fags...

machstealth responds:

thanks!

I hope you make another one...

but in this one you use swords, and you slip and fall on the end of the sword. That would make me happy.

machstealth responds:

HAHAHAHA!!! HAHAH!! FUCK YOU!

its not that i didn't like it...

.. i did, it's just that this kind of thing doesn't really belong on newgrounds in my opinion. It would be better suited on filmfights (i'm not trying to promote unrelated websites here, so dont report the review) or some other site like it.

The film showed that you choreographed your fight quite well and for that i congratulate you. If i was going to make any suggestion however, it would be to improve the quality of the sound and the script. If you do submit movies like this again to newgrounds try to include some aspect of flash in the presentation, although the sound affects were a nice touch.
Thats juat my opinion and good look in your future productions.

machstealth responds:

well i dont think knox's video dubs should be on newgrounds OR his clay mations. Only because there videos....you piece of shit

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Dec 29, 2004
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