Score: 9
"MASTER of cliche... a better education entirely"
date: February 16, 2005
this is a film you can learn from! having bErated your 'Timline history' i decided to check out your other stuff... you can really build films. you've really being watching how those fellas make them,, your slow pans into charater... snapping about... flashing visuals... wow. Its great to see how you use filmic devices, you make them evident. your storey boarding skills must be top notch i can imagine how you might play with sequence and lay out... hmmm... this skill enables you to construct such engaging and watchable film narative... with lots of movement... to make watchable films that long alone is a serious accomplishment and needs craft mastery. in critique, with potatoe boy, the same competant deployment of filmic device used to construct the narative has begun to constrict it... the storey is a little tired in the way its told because of the cliches adhered too, and the whole becomes unoriginal... but i'm sure you'll begin to construct + reconstruct your own devices and with it your newground soon enough. oh i thought dog vs god was your best i've seen !, 100%,, THANKS.