HI everyone!! And thank the ones who helped me with the reviews.
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1) I played HALO for maybe 2 times( LOL!) I'm totally NOT obsessed with it :-p
2)What's that al about the script!! MARK MY WORDS(cause i maybe said it for 10 times by now!) IT'S WAS AN IMPROVISATION!!
3) "It doesn't has a good storyline"
WELL D'UH!! You only saw PARt 2 OF 4 PARTS!! I will post the links of the other 3 movies and if you like i will try submitting those...
Thanks,
Gtrz,
Muchacho
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well, it kinda sucked. good music, but not enough of realism. Hey, the guy are with RED dress and they are in a whatever infiltration mission! they shall wear black! at least! the gun is very cool, the movie has been well done, but no special effects. you can do this with flash, no?
um.. yea..
idk but it seems u guys r a bit obsessed with halo...
I mean who doesnt like halo? but seriously... cmon man.. dats kinda lame
Nice one.
This was nice, I liked the video, the fake gun, and the first person shooter view. Now for the points that could be improved :).
First. Turn of your sound, hold a piece of paper infront of the subtitles and watch the video again, It seems much more threathening and thrilling, witht that "man down" corpse lying in there. ^_^ It just doesn't seem right to have a person talking to himself the whole time through. Seems forced and actually a bit funny.
Second, Master chief...been playing to much halo? (2) :p
For the rest its very nice, good to see people trying out other media's instead of the usuall sprite/drawn things.
eh....?
wow kid...
1) This movie might have been cool between you and your buds, but i seriously would not have submitted this garbage.
2) improvise is defined by websters as fabricating out of what is conveniently on hand. that looked scripted (and no a script does not just tell you what to say, and how i hope your dialogue wasn't scripted or i am seriously worried about you)
3) what is the purpose of this junk? is it just so you can walk around with a gun and squeak your pre-pubescent "Oh my god!"'s at ear drum shattering pitch?
not trying to be hard on you, but these were my initial impressions. My advice, is to work out a better story-line and come up with actual dialogue. if you're worried your dialogue will blow elephant cock, then forget the dialogue, take it from another approach. your camera work and sound was good for non-professional /non-trained people.
good-luck.
Come on!!
WE have implants....
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AND AGAIN, IT'S AN INSANE IMPROVISATION!!!
dudes, don't you get the fun??? ^^
Grtz,
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