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kinda gave up. its hard work all frame by frame and such. whata you guys think
I fell asleep on mah keyboard.
Smooth animation, good soundtrack, and a joke at the end. Very nice. BTW, whats the name of the song? I'm gonna get it LEGALLY....well, I think its legal...heh heh
Blind melon- no rain, if i remember correctly :)
I like the song and the animations but the only thing you should get rid of is the fat thing at the end because it's just dum...
First off why have you submit this if it isn't even finished? It's no excuse that you just 'could not be bothered' because you still submitted it, which makes me think you did that only to get your flash count up.
Anyway It's a good thing you aren't going to finish this becuase I fail to see the point of it. It is all frame drawn together which gives that appearance of lazyness and the whole thing is just random black lines, you could at least make it more interesting and add a background.
Hmmm a lack of effort here methinks.
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Definately not the greatest!
Well you obviously would admit it to not be the greatest. But im happy you will never finish it. one because its not all frame drawn seperately. Anyway, you should have a .. well a background to the whole thing. make a story.
Maybe get a tablet to draw with (comp tablet like wacom). Theyre excellent especially for this stuff like. You should make a movie based on your own flash drawn sprites and graphics, and use the frame by frame talent to do walking scenes and shit.
Good luck in the future, but only if in the future you make a film with a background, colour! and some characters. none of this random shit. Random stuff is good will trance music and drugs..
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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