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This is the first part to the third episode in my Batman series. Don't review to say it sucks.
This was interesting
I really how this gets started and the character work is not halfbad, the "MUSIC" made this work well, and you make it like a real movie and thats what kept me interested here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I believe the onlything here could be that it can be longer and there can be some diaolog among chavrters.
I thought it was a good start, but like all flash videos, could use some touching up.
Here's some good stuff:
-The animation seemed choppy, but it flowed for the entire video, so it didn't draw away my attention. I liked it.
-Fans of the series knows who is who. The art wasn't bad.
Some (hopefully) helpful stuff:
-Some continuity errors with Two-Face. Sometimes his "Bad" face was on the left, sometimes on the right. Being a humongous fan of Two-Face, I can say that his "bad" side is always on the lef tside of his face.
-People who aren't fans aren't going to really know what's going on - maybe. There aren't any lines n' stuff, but I think that the heros/villains are suggested well enough.
All in all, good job.
it was good. But it's a tad bit messed up. How about you fix it up a little,no?
THe animation was choppy as stated before. However anyone who watched the DCU batman would know about the purple two-face. Not oo bad just you need to work on the animation.
i think you got it wrong, isn't 2 face supposed to be fucked up on his right side, who cares, this movie was good
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