Score: 4
"A halfway-decent idea executed halfway-decently"
date: December 14, 2004
A few suggestions:
1. Anything involving the words "you got served" isn't funny unless it's actually making fun of _You Got Served_. So this is where something resembling plot would be useful---you don't even need a full plot, just SOMETHING.
2. You needed to use a plush figure with more flexibility. A teddy bear is too rigid to perform the moves necessary.
OK, that's all I got. So, in summary, YOU GOT SERVED. Try again.