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Hmmm well it was interesting dont get me wrong there, but i thought it could be greatly improved such as your character designs you should mold them so its more character like, and have much more scenes and stuff going on.
Character designs needed
There isnt much to say in the way of positive aspects when it comes to this submission, i mean i guess your humour was good in parts but leaving it on the cliffhanger that you did it seemed to be a bit of a downer. I thought the character designs needed a lot of work and the lack of sound was a big problem, the text just wasnt very well displayed.
Well this submission was a funny submission. It was funny in a way that you laugh at something for not being that great. The graphics were poor and looked like they were done by a 12 year old, if not younger and the story was especially odd. The transitions were poorly done and the ending sequence of a threat was also a bit out there. Not good.
If you're going to take oyur time to plan out a story, you might as well do it justice by taking the time to make drawings above a 5 year old level, and at least animate some realistic movement, rather than just sliding still figures around the screen.
im srry, but its true i agree w/ doodle, also, dont ever tell people that ur movie needs a rating of x, it just pisses most of us off, just 1 more reason to forget u ever did this one. im sure you can do better, if not... stick w/ ur day job man
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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