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Well, ill keep this statement short and sweet. Like it or not, I tried hard.
This movie is ok.and it brought back memories of that movie "Office Space" becouse of the music.
not bad not great
It looks ok.
the music works well as far as a trailer goes.
but i hate to say it, its a little rough.
though i do agree that the porn does get way to many points.....
then again, boys will be boys...
any how, keep at it.
it looks promising.
I would love to give imput but
Ok What's my imput on this
1. if you say you've started this already
drop in a few images or animations, not just stills..
2. Even though I read it I can't picture it..
Bring me in man, Make me want to see the movie make we like your work right now I'm not even interested.. why because you've killed the point of a good trailer.."try to remember the point of a trailer..
3.Finally people will only like a trailer if it looks completed and not half assed..
4.I really don't like ripping peoples work apart but heck someone have to do it in the nicest way and to tell you the truth I'm the only nice person here...who'll give you advice
Look kid don't get mad just look at criticism and make believe they are stepping stones. they guide you or well crumble.. take heed plus check out other animations or trailers on newgrounds to get a better idea of what is acceptable
I do not want to sound like a prick but compared to all of the shit that is loaded into the portal daily, those "first movies" most of the time suck ass, jesus man, I really worked hard on this. I dont need to be shit on. While someone (I knw i bring this up a lot, but what the hell)with no skill in flash makes some porno and buttons and gets a fucking 3 or 4. God damn this is a really unfair life we all live in, and it never seems to turn for me in NG. Ill tell you that.
It was WAY WAY WAY too big.
You used stickfigures.
The gun animation sucked.
But otherwise, nice try.
I appriciate your input, but what gets me mad is that I am already at about 1.06, while pornography is at like 4. I am not saying you look at it. I am saying my animation is pretty damn good, and I did not desrve a 3 for it. Humor 10? I get it, its a way of saying my movie sucks.. :(
Work on your graphics a little: Make lines on faces thicker, make faces less pointy & mor rounded off, and finally get rid of the stick figures. All and all if you work no the graphics it sounds like a good movie.
Thanks for your honest input. I have already started the film, it is getting along well, but I am stuck. :D Thanks.
A short film about a park bench
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