last part epic!
your good on ur first flash everone would be at first suckish but much more better later on because they might have learned their mistakes by complaints of the commenters oh and this is good though
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Hey all im new to flash and this is my first movie ever, its true!!!! so be as harsh as u want cause i know i prolly did loads of things wrong but i tryed my best. Now sence this is my first flash movie i didnt know what kind of animation to use so hey, some people asked wuts with the weak body and head turning animation, just think of paper mario cause i really wanted to use a simple yet cool movement, well thats all and ill try to make more
longer
i'v seen worse
you should make it longer
awesome man
its your first huh nice keep it comin
that was good
hahahahahaha that was AWESOME "Its because im fat isnt it" really good you should make loads more great for your first to
Not bad for your first flash
I have to agree with a couple of the guys below. It was good, the beggining was pretty good, you realy built up the suspence but you could have done more. The "cause I'm fat" joke was funny but you needed more. Still pretty good. I liked it. :)
