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This is my first flash, changing the main character as i work on the new episode's, i hope you like. >< i didnt know trailers didnt do well heh, but thanks for the tips and reviews^^ good luck to u all!
nice...beginner i presume?
if this was the first flash that you ever made/submitted 2 newgrounds, your a natural.i tried and im not a natural b elieve me i tried i just have to stick with spriting...*sigh*
fairly average for a first flash animation.
i suggest you have a browse at some of the zillions of tutorials and also look at the audio portal for your sound.
if you do that, you should become a lot better.
Good... but not good enough
For your first movie isn't bad at all, i'm sure you'll improve through time.
- Fluent animation
- the gun animation rocks
- good intro speech
- when the guy shots the police the arm looks FAT
- physics: the shot should have made the police to fall backwards not to lean on the wall...
- times new roman... why you don't use another font? something more accurate to your movie
- the quote at the beginning... it's too fast i only read the first line
i'm looking foward your work, you look promising :)
wow,that was reall good !
man, for your 1st movie that was fucking kool! beats the hell outa stick moveis most ppl jsut do them fighting! but yeah, was alol to short, but right to the point! and i like ppl like that! to day is your lucky day! because after a long string of 1's ans 0's , he is a 5 !
lookin forward to seeing more! ¬_¬
well, trailers don't usually do well, but that was pretty good. Im looking foreward to seeing the rest of it, it looks promising. neeto idea for a flash too
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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