work on da sound and drawings,drawings are bad

the story seemed good, but the sound is bad, and the drawings are not good. improve those and this will be great. dont know what animation program u use, but it doesn't look too good.

THAT SUCKED!

IT STILL SUCKED

erm

music didn't really seem to fit with this.. some better music would have helped this submission tremendously. i do understand it's just a preview but.. graphics could have been better too. maybe a few voice actings would be nice as well. But other than that, decent job.

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this series, or film has a shitload of potential, just as an artist, im inspired by ur character design...the only suggestion would to use more frame by frame than tweening, and just correct some perspectives, but even though this movie didnt score that well, i for one, will be anticipating it

ok

not bad preview, but if you work hard on the actual project, it could be a lot better than this little preview you got here.