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Based on the old Captain N cartoon. Kevin and the gang continue their adventures in Sonic's world for some high speed antics.
Alright, front page. Good to see the work paid off. Thanks a bunch Newgrounds!
Where were you all this time, asshole? Why'd it take u that long to make THAT? Oh yeah, can i be a voice for one of the characters?
The Bobblehead master returns!
Well not that many other NG artists use the bobblehead style, but whatever. Again, excellent animation friend, but you need to pick up your pacing a bit more.
I'm not saing to ditch dialogue in favor of action, quite the contrary, but work on your delivery. Speed up the exchanges and time your jokes better-- the scene with X relating to a 3D environment could have been done a lot quicker-- hanging us on for a longer delivery makes the joke old by the time you get to your punchline.
You've developed some interesting villians for this series, don't deny them equal character development--push your thesis/conflict! Allow all your characters the freedom to move and develop-- don't restrict them to their alloted roles.
By your responses to my reviews in the past, you've always lent a kind ear to my comments. I, as fan of the style, do not want to see this become another Waterman or John's Arm. Take a look at Jason Dix's series S.A.M.V. for some good examples of rapid fire, natural dialogue. But I'm biased, I'm now co-writing for that series. Even so, look up my aim or e-mail in my profile. It's been a pleasure seeing this latest installment and hope to see Part Four in the near future.
Thanks for the review Joker. I always appreciate the critisizm and do intend to continue to make improvements to the series as time rolls on.
Awesome, just plain awesome!
ROFL, that was a very good episode. I liked it from Sonic's arrogance to Eggman's (or is it Robotnik's?) stupidity, to that Goomba's story. I eagerly await episode 4, very good job there!
I've been waiting for this, well done :D
Very good, worth the wait.
Can't beat that game!!
It's Payday Fellas !
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