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Another angstyish flash. If you are going to complain about the graphics or the style don't bother. If you bitch you will probably be mocked.
song is perfect
nice choice of song any ways for the last reviewer behind me the point of this film is saying this world isnt wonderful and never will be people who think it ever will are idiots and drones just look at this world real hard for a moment its truely truely dark
ok explain to me how muggings, murder, and stick figures have to do with a wonderfull world. this was a whole lot of nothing but grey still frames.
Well, that was interesting...
What is the point of submitting a flash if you don't want it to be criticised "If you are going to complain about the graphics or the style don't bother." The point of the reviews is so that you can see what would make your flash more interesting to the masses. I thought that it was a bit slow and could have done with a more interesting graphical style.
I see what you were trying to do, but I don't think you were there just yet. I've had my share of crappy Flash Animations (Key word "Animations") so I know it's hard to just grit your teeth and aim for the best quality when you can throw it out in the open as soon as there's a "The End" screen. It was just a little boring to watch, especially if you weren't a Louis Armstrong fan or if you didn't agree with the style of the graphics. Keep at it, though.
Well, if I'm not allowed to recommend working on the graphics then all I have is to remind you to give your music credits.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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