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A short cartoon on the book In Cold Blood by Truman Capote.
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hey people i dont know whats your problem..
itz a bit short but i somehow loved the style...
Straightly said....I hated it. Your movie was pretty annoying and I didn't really like it. I hope you can do better in the future.
The idea was good, but the execution of it wasn't. The graphics (house, fence etc) weren't detailed enough (shading), the speech/buttons were frankly annoying, and the storyline didn't have any depth to it. Spend a bit more time on the graphics, and get yourself a decent storyboard together - I think you have the potential to produce something far better than this
The drawings were kind of bad, and looked much too simple. I'm not sure if you've noticed, but there's also a white bar above the screen where your name comes up. I've also noticed that you didn't really draw any characters, excluding the outlines on the part with the shotgun.
It could also use a storyline, maybe you should make a prequel.
I liked the fact that you could skip through the text with the arrows, though, I like that in Flash movies. Too bad there were only two or three text-balloons.
I haven't read In Cold Blood but it might have been better to show more than you did. Shoul've shown the guy gettig blasted. Could improve the graphics a bit more too e.g. more detail.
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