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Yea almost two years ago i made this one, many people seemed to like this one, alot. Im proud of it.
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Great work... i like your stuff. I love the psa style...You mentioned in response to my other review, something about drawing better on paper. The solution to that is to just take a digital photograph of your drawings, or scan them, then import them into flash, and trace the facial features, and closely edit the lines to curve. Another thing i noticed is how your audio clips at the end of each audio clip symbol. Edit the envelope of the symbol, and drop the volume at the end of each clip to eliminate that. good work!
i really liked it
just make the communist more realistic next time
I love the idea. I just think that with different voice acting (no offense, but the voice acting here is no where near believable film-stock-narration) it could be better. Also, it could have used a bit differentiation in the filmstock errors.
Just let me say that I love the black and white thing. Making fun of old educational films. Gotta love it.
It is very fun to make fun of old film stock...i had a blast making fun of that shit
i like it.very funny,but.....
I like your silent films better.
But quite amusing. Would like to see a little more animation. You should have got some ol' dancehall music or something playing in the background too, it needed that really.
Overall, not a bad submission. Keep it up!
Yea I figured i needed more animation i was a little lazt so didn t animate that much. I really wanted some music but i couldnt figure out get music and voice overs. And the ways I tried were not effective overall thanks for reviewing and thanks again for making it constructive!
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