Score: 10

"wow.... magor jelly loss"

by: chris-881rs

date: April 7, 2005

mmmmm after that battle i would go there and put all that jelly on my toast....

Score: 10

"KICK ASS"

by: Ihateturds017

date: October 29, 2004

This was tight OMG I loved it it was funny and tight.... IM bored soo I dont remember wht I was gonna write but an awesome flash

Score: 9

"Yo that was great"

by: Redmegaman

date: October 28, 2004

i liked this flash. y did a great job it was good all the way beging to end.

Score: 10

"rocks"

by: MKSpyke

date: October 28, 2004

wow dude that was so god damn awesome....nuff said

Score: 7

"not bad, but u have work to do"

by: ZeRoCooLness

date: October 28, 2004

it started off great, killing wat i presume r "jelly" beans, or maybe strawberrys....anywayz, it started off good w/ the jelly things and the mass killings and ur dude drinking some jelly, but then, you changed its direction to i dunno. u had big monsters and an evil queen and then dragan ball z showed up. on your next work either stick to one idea or add some more story into it. that would def save this piece is if you had more story into it. like when the big monster came out, tell us its a super jelly monster or some shiz. and also, color would greatly help the project too, w/ alittle more backround. so yea, if you could beef up the story (get the emotion flowing) and get more detail/colour your peice would kick some hardcore ass.

sorry if im harsh, jus trying to help