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Just something I made for Halloween. I'm submitting it early because I might not be able to submit it on Sunday, but anyway, please leave a review, I enjoy reading them.
Function over functionality... What you have here is good, your graphics are really excellent, but the animation is minimal and simply not interesting. While the clown's face, the black and white scheme, and soundtrack are eerie and set the mood, the end result just seems like it's missing something, or maybe it's just unfinished.
A more detailed or drawn-out death sequence would have elaborated on the mood, I think. Or perhaps something showing the victim after he was dead, like his body in the foreground with the clown int he background. As it is, your animation ends a little too quickly for it to be ominous, which I think was the intention.
It's alright. I mean, it's creepy and all, but I think if you make it longer and imrpove the animation (like the clown's face when he wanted to kill the guy). And I think the blood could have been more realistic.
For the future, I suggest cleaner animation and length and longevity. Really have something to offer.
I know you can do it man, keep up the good work and I can't wait to see your future flashes!
I don't blame this guy for what he did
he is just another victim of our heartless world
Cara wtf este me assusta!
Still, you get a weird feeling from the music mostly, even the name of the song. It's almost like he's doing something to your soul. I'm not even going to say that the person was evil or even bad. Just saying knowing how the creator went out, then the music, AND THE TITLE OF THE SONG, really creepy.
As far as this being insight into his mind...it kinda is, however this is also a common beginner flash. Honestly the song says more than the animation. These thoughts were in his head prior to the animations, a little research will verify that. Part of a handicap that animation has is that you can only animate what you can....well....animate. However if this person created My Little Pony, they would of still been the same person, a textbook psychopath who xperienced a psycotic break.
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