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This is Mac and JayJay. The first in this series, brought to you by Macca of BadFlashProductions.
Your animation is uninspiring, your voice acting is bad, and the already-bad jokes are delivered terribly.
at least im not made of paper
That was very good! Iove it. Very nice jokes. "YOU NAUGHTY BITCH". Now that was funny. I liked your diferent voices and smooth animation. Perfect. 10/10
thanks alot dave im a big fan of your star wars aftermath :0
Just as amusing as before...
...but why re-enter it? It's the same - Still funny! Really good, but why re-hash it?
i havnt entered it before it was stolen man
Absolutely pure gold! A great start to something with limitless potential... hope to see many more follow-ups to this episode.
Definitely need to do something about the sound, that was my only vice... other than that looked great.
Keep up the great work
Look forward to episode 2
ill imrpvoe the voices it seems to be evetyone elses main problem
i liked the animation, it looked good, but the acting sucked, and lots of spelling mistakes in the subtitles......
ok ill try imrpove that i went over it best i could and il try imrpove the voices
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
Meeting new people on the first day can be a real gamble.
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