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This is Mac and JayJay. The first in this series, brought to you by Macca of BadFlashProductions.
I liked it
The best part was when he said to tell the ghost to **** off!
yeah my fave bit to
Not too bad
but could have been better. The jokes were a little stale, no offence.
Good job... now take all the criticisms and try to work on them, so says... THE LEADER!
Uhhh I mean Darren >.>
now now darren were both only Police Lieutenants lol
Is JayJay Gay Gay?
JayJay has got some problems. He wants to have sex with his room mate how friggin sick. The flash was good though. I like the graphics and the story line wasn't half bad.
im leaving jayjay open at the moment its subconcious ...... fuck me you just gave me the idea for part 2!!!
1337 kid you can expect your names in the credits for making me striek a thought lol
The graphics need a work, but I worked on flash before so I know it's hard to do, and I gave anyone respect that acatually takes the time to do it. The humor on the other hand needs work. I smiled at a few parts but nothing that really wanted to make me laugh. Keep trying though, can only get better.
thanks man ncie review
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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