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This is a sprite movie me and my mate came up with. Its crap but o well it should be OK :) if you have any ideas of how we can torture Luigi or Mario send me an e-mail on email@example.com
sounds pretty bad and not very good animation.... not alot of new death styles either... basically it could be better on alot of levels
It was so so.
It looked mostly simplistic and unoriginal. At some places you started using sound effects and then you silenced them out.
Also you have the thing with the falling pole repeated 3 or 4 times!! cmon!
BUT- here what I liked-
I liked the Sonic part!! This was sort of qute! Except- you should of animated the MARIO BREAK UP parts rather then doing a cheap trick with scale. That looks crappy. Make the theme more specified (such as- Mario spuff, or sonic vs mario, or mario cartoon.) Your animation and sounds need alot of work. If you try harder you'll get there! ;) later.
I let this one live, but you need an audio track. The complete silence is painful to the viewer. Also, consider shortening the times at the end of each scene. Too long of a pause. This is not a bad concept, it just needsa a lot of improvement
good graphics needs sound and better blood
also u should stop using the same ideas to kill, u coulda used a bazooka bowsers back princess poisons mario and fucks luigi then they both die cmon theres better ideas
im actually collecting ideas to continue this movie so thanks email it to me
you really should try and make your sounds a bit clearer. The animation has potental but the blood was extremly horible.
A short film about a park bench
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