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Alrighte, this is the first actual flash movie i've ever finished, i never touched flash before 2 or 3 weeks ago. A lot of work went into it over the course of a week.
I decided to go with a completely greyscale color scheme to capture the old feel of the good horror films, alfred hitchcock etc. While it might not do them justice I am quite proud of it.
Yeah the walking animation is a bit screwed up ill have to work on that. It's also a little shorter than i would have liked. Either way i hope you enjoy it and give a constructive review.
Good job for your first Flash! You seem to have picked up basic animating techniques quite nicely, and you're not a bad artist either. Good choice of music and sound effects too.
I'm sorry to say that it didn't really scare me much. To tell the truth, I thought it progressed a bit slowly. There wasn't really enough suspense or mystery built up to make me wonder what would happen; I kinda knew the guy was gonna get it in the end.
It was still enjoyable though. Good job!
I've seen better
That wasnt very good. I've seen much better.
Very good flash, but...
When you begin getting better with flash I suggest you remake this, and really scare the carp out of us all! Srot of like Exmortis or something like that. That game scared the HELL out of me.
Anyways, the animation was not the best i've seen(not even close) BUT i've seen some pretty bad ones before, and because of those i give this a 6/10 in animation.(I'm telling ya remake this when you get better:D)
The sound effects were very well. Everything was just great in the sound. 9/10
Violence, I was wondering when he'd die :D 6/10
All in all, this was a great flash, and when you get better remake it.
hehe thanks for the encouragement, I'd like to remake it with a more gorey ending and perhaps have him stop to look around and such... i just really don't have the talent to pull that off quite yet. More likely than not I'll remake it in the future.
Working on a completely different type of movie at the moment though.
This movie definitely has some style to it. The sound fx are really good. From walking footsteps, to rain, thunderstorms, creeping around.. damn. Background graphics are really good, the characters are drawn really good. I like how that creature was sneaking around a lot that was great. Really nice stuff!
Thanks for the kind review. Yeah the backgrounds took quite awhile. I would've liked to have the foreground animations come out a bit better than they did though. The sounds took quite awhile to make/find ... and once again I'm glad you enjoyed it.
There aren't enough GOOD creepy flash movies on newgrounds... i have plans to make another after completely my current project.
hmm if this was your first flash its pretty cool only the animations could beter the rest was cool
Yeah, its not that the walking animation was bad... its really that i just didnt understand, visually, how a person walks when i made the walk cycle and tried to cover it up with rotations ... eh nevermind you're right it could've been better =D NEXT TIME !!
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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