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another nice episode in this series.
Tempo man! Tempo!
Your pacing is pretty bad, you need to keep the scenes moving. Zooming in on the window while the Seinfeld theme played took way too long. It almost seemed like you liscened the song and wanted to get full use of it. Just fade the music out and get the next scene a-rollin'. Same thing for the dialouge at the beginning and the eye fondling scene. Learn pacing and you've added another good thing to your flash arsenal.
Not really funny
Sorry man, not your best one. Didn't laugh at all.
The Seinfeld part was pretty painful. Felt a little forced.
....that dude had big eyes, what the hell
Not as good a Salad Fingers..
...but I suspect it was intentionally bad...kinda like the The Cheat does a cartoon at homestarrunner. I'm not sure, but I think this might have been created by the guy to does the stuff at oddtodd com I noticed a similarity in the voice, particularly in the Banana fingers Episode 4 when Hubert Cucumberdale is talking to the worm....sounded just like the guy in the Laid Off cartoon at oddtodd com....i dunno. If so, his own stuff is funnier than these parodies.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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