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Something im working on basically. So far i havent added sound except one song and its by AmIEvil. Hes a great composer. Mana Realm based on my original story.
Okay, Keep at it.
This looks like a good idea, but the genious who named himself "mister reveiw" Has a point, The names could definetly use improvement. To get you started, I'll let you use MY name, "Kemrin Holimion" if you so desire. But even if you dont, you need to pick names that are better than "Rune" and "Draconium". Beyond that, The hippocit is accurate in your degeneration rate. It looks like as you neared the end, You where fizzling out. You need to drink a Sobe Adrenelin/Coke Syrup Copuond, wake up (Get back from the hospital after your heart attack) and put in many more long hours. This title has a very great potential. It could become a legend, if only you would try harder than hard to make it so. (When drawing the armys, colored stripes and circles dont cut it, When killing demons, DONT LET ME SEE THE DIFFERENT LAYERS!!, GET VOICE ACTORS, ADD NEW SOUND, PULL THE STORY BACK TOGETHER AND, FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED HUMAN!!)
The graphics were great in the beginning, good storyline, and great music. The only problem in the beginning was the the fact the characters did not talk but words were given for them at the bottom. As the story continued the graphics got worse, the storyline got hazy, and the names were definitely not creative. I recommend you keeep the original storyline and start over.
Well it had a good story, but I kinda missed the underlying music to get the whole mood into place.
Just keep working at it, and it will get better next time.
It wasnt too bad in the beginning but once it got to the battle the graphics slipped down, way down. But it still had a good story line keep up the good work.
i really liked it at the begining really great story and all, then it looks like you lost intrest as your animation got a bit slopier, but anyway not as bad as everyone is claiming im looking forward to the next one. My only advice is if u could try and improve the fighting animation it would be even better.
Oh and i gave low sound mark because it cut out in the middle.
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