humm okay

I love it , good song with a little poetic animation
Just put more work pls : P

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Make a full version, dang you!

Make a full version, then submit it to Newgrounds, and I will watch it. 'Tis a great song. I've actually learned how to play it! I'm so happy. I like the style of your animations. Keep doing what you love, it will benefit us.

oh ok.

You need to resubmit this with a full version, because I really think it could be something great.

awww

you missed the best part of the song. kinda. Pretty funny animations, sand looks like fire =)

This isn't your best

If it is.....you really need to work on your skills before submitting anything else to NG.