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please dont be unfair in judgements of minor unrealistic details. thank you for watching
A perfect begining....
I liked it a lot.... a perfect soundtrack. I hope the other two are as good as this one. This series should blossom into something very VERY serious. It is a work of art in the making.
this was wonder full
man that was grate add koolkurtisontherun at hotmail dot com but yeha off to watch the nexxt 2!!!
Sorry about that, my previous review (nwsk acc) was written for another flash, and not this one.. so disregard any comments I had.
Anyway, as for this flash, it was an interesting start, but it would have been nice if we were given more background information such as who the mage was, what he was doing and so on. Also, the plot might be a bit cliche, as there are quite a lot of stories and so on about some tragic incident at birth, then raised to become some godlike person who will save the world.. then again, this is just the first of the series, it might be different.
Overall, your flash was pretty well done, smooth animation, and with your own unique style of drawing. I loved the music, and hope to hear more of it ^^
However, there was one gripe about the flash I had which caused me to give the lower score, the entire movie was too darn slow moving..
Hope you could perhaps speed up some of the earlier parts, ie the farming part, where we see a name for nearly a minute..
Less dramatic pauses would also give the parts that need em so much more effect; if you keep inserting them everywhere, it slows the pace of the entire movie down alot, and people would get bored pretty quickly.
i love this! its one of the best flash animations here on newgrounds. i plan to have a animation series like this, but not ripping off of. no offence but it'll be better than this and the best animation series on newgrounds. thanks for inspiring me.
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While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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