that was good
y is majin ben wearing fusion clothes?
Author Comments
Well Im back with episode 2.
After the mixed reviews of episode 1. I changed the visuals and audio (for the better i hope) i've decided to drop the voice acting side of it for the time being.
oh one liner note. When Azgeta talks about "Son"(Pauten)and "Shenbi" he is reffering to a manga only story arc. The "shenbi saga" is currently running on my site. So If you want more infomation you know where to look.
ok on with the show.
Looks Better...Sounds worse....
You've cleaned up the drawings and characters tremendously, but I still don't like the tecnical animation style.
But this really, really needs voice acting. Without it, the piece is very, very boring.
And about the story...did you change the names because you're afraid of a lawsuit, or is this supposed to be a parody and I don't get it? IN any case the writing still suffers, although now I see why. Everything relevant to the Flash should be explained in the Flash. Referring to other material for the crux of one's story isn't a good idea.
Son-Finale responds:
Thank you for your fair and honest review, I appreciate it. ^_^
The name changes are nothing to with lawsuits. These characters are releated geneticly to the original cast (who will appear).I designed them to resemble Goku, Vegeta...ect. As a sort of way to help people get used to the series and its cast quickly.
Also I intend to explain Son Pauten's death very soon in more detail.
Lol
i't Cool but I don't realy get the name's of the persons:S
hmm
If i wanted to read i would have gotten the book.
o.O
Wyahh, that's cool, but one thing I don't get... Who's Pantun? Is that Gokou-San?