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Sep 15, 2004 | 12:27 AM EDT

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This being Thirsty Gerbil's very first flash cartoon we were a bit ambitious. Because of which we got a little burnt out so this may be the first and last episode of the "series." We will have other cartoons however. Keep an eye out and thank you so much for watching.

Reviews


CheesiusCheesius

Rated 2 / 5 stars September 15, 2004

Needs improvement, but not too bad for a first ep

It was kinda funny, but I was distracted by a lot of little flaws. The animation was okay, but the sync was off with the soundtrack all the way through. Work more on animating lips moving, too - not bad, but rough in places.

What was with the sound, anyhow? It was super quiet, muffled, and out of sync all the way through... Until the credits, when it was crisp and clean and plenty loud. Irritating.



Seaviper101Seaviper101

Rated 1 / 5 stars September 15, 2004

Ummmm.

Too much Family Guy in that. Leave the funny stuff to Seth.



Brink1Brink1

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 15, 2004

Yep......

This was ok, not great but that's jusy my opinion, the drawings are done well and the audio seems to be good. The storyline didnt really appeal to me though. Good work though.



lonevigilantelonevigilante

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars September 15, 2004

names's the best part

it also got a couple laughs outta me. was hard to hear sometimes.



Stumpy-JayStumpy-Jay

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 15, 2004

First flash?

Well thank god there are some people who actually make something worthwhile instead of submitting loads of crap. It is extremely good for a first flash, but still could improve. The only improvements can generally only be made by expensive equip and experience making cartoons. Keep it up.