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Nevil is my creation whos pretty cute and cuddly considering hes the cousin of the SATAN! speaking of satan, you haven't seen him around here, have you?
Not bad at all..
It would b better if u polished the graphics up a bit, and made the writing clearer, but it's a good flash none-the-less.
keep up the work. i expect great things from you =)
i like it
i think this really has potential to be a series, and look forward to the next one. i like the cliff-hanger. i understand how much work has to go into this, and how long it takes, so good job. keep up the good work.
thank you :) im not really sure if i want to make another one now tho.. its just so much work... im trying to learn more tho, so it wont be as crappy next time :D
haha nevil is a pretty funny little dude u made up. u should have made it longer and have him find satan or sumthing i dunno. i mite have had my volume down(woops) but i dont think there was any sound. possibly fix this up!!
lol, thanks...! btw there is sound
I see a lot of potential into this project. I hope you do make more. Like theindomitablebug said youve got intresting stuff here. You can make it kick ass, you just gotta work at it.
thanks im glad you liked it :)
While I can't really say a whole lot on the quality of the movie, I am interested. You have a lot of work to do if you want to make this a truly good submission, but I think it has a chance. It could definitely be good shit man, just keep working at it. Try to avoid the cliche'd and corny dialogue, clean things up a bit, and let the viewer read into things more than just "Hi, I'm Nevil. Satan is my cousin." Make the viewer want to find out who this guy his, what the hell is going on. You've got interesting stuff here. You can make it kick ass, you just gotta work at it.
thank you for your review! im glad you liked it... :)
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