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Sep 1, 2004 | 6:48 PM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place September 2, 2004

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Author Comments

This is a dark thriller I've been working on for quite some time. It took me a long time to make so please watch it to the end.

Reviews


BellsamaBellsama

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

T_T that was so sad

hey there...
you almost made me cry... it was so said.. and I felt so sorry for that guy and her 2...

maybe the pixs aren't best quality BUT the storyline was good :D



ArmedMonkeyArmedMonkey

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Spelling errors!

"knowing that he could not have me DRIVED him crazy"

drove, not drived.



Learner102Learner102

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Cool

The story really held my interest. Good job!



BlueMintBlueMint

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Can you say, "Writer?"

My god are you an amazing writer! You could make MILLIONS if this was a movie!



redhammer01redhammer01

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

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wow........ very....... very moving..... yeah... good job. I need to take a few moments to think about what i just saw.