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Sep 1, 2004 | 6:48 PM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place September 2, 2004

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Author Comments

This is a dark thriller I've been working on for quite some time. It took me a long time to make so please watch it to the end.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Wow, very nice indeed

Wow, the story kept me watching and hooked. nice job, i was expecting a bit of cliche story twists, but there weren't much, it was original and a great story. Although i hate how long Fritz's face is, kinda ugly but i guess that's just to add chracter, nice job.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

that was a pretty good concept Mark

This would b a good thing to make into a movie. Good job man, nice story.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Can you say, "Writer?"

My god are you an amazing writer! You could make MILLIONS if this was a movie!


Rated 5 / 5 stars


That would make a hell of a good movie.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Very well done! And greatly original! I NEVER HEARD OF A STORY LIKE THIS! KEEP IT UP!