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This is a dark thriller I've been working on for quite some time. It took me a long time to make so please watch it to the end.
Wow, very nice indeed
Wow, the story kept me watching and hooked. nice job, i was expecting a bit of cliche story twists, but there weren't much, it was original and a great story. Although i hate how long Fritz's face is, kinda ugly but i guess that's just to add chracter, nice job.
that was a pretty good concept Mark
This would b a good thing to make into a movie. Good job man, nice story.
Can you say, "Writer?"
My god are you an amazing writer! You could make MILLIONS if this was a movie!
That would make a hell of a good movie.
Very well done! And greatly original! I NEVER HEARD OF A STORY LIKE THIS! KEEP IT UP!
ASTEROID HURLING TOWARDS EARTH!!!
tasty crunch of yummy cookie crumble
Detective Nwar is one day away from retirement.
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