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Onish. What was I thinking?
Take it back to the drawing board...
Even that one little motion of the guy putting his face in his hands is enough to show that you're an excellent artist.
But I wish you'd have somebody else write your stories and text, because you're clearly barely even literate. "Comming?" "Groupe?" I mean, come on. If English isn't your first language, I guess it's excusable, but really as a service to your beautiful artwork, you should let somebody who can read and write do the thinking part for you. It would add much more credibility.
And the line "It's easy to get on the battlefield--the hard part is getting off" is corny to a monstrous degree and barely makes sense. PLEASE get a partner.
((( OMNISH=? )))
omg ok well i loved the artwork it was cool and fresh, but previews are just so tacky, hehe i say that alot, ohwell, my advice never make demos...
for what you have, doesnt show any of the plot though, if you ever decide to make the full movie I will be watching for it.
this is a great little trailer
what the music btw, sounds cool
This was a really entertaining piece the only small problem is it's not as good as my cartoon
B-ace Ball just come and see if you think it's as good...Badda bing
A short film about a park bench
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